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The Desert Dreaming - page 3 by *Shadsie:iconShadsie:

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Submitted: July 21, 2008
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If you truly open your mind and try to see the world as other people see it, you may find wonderful things.

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Page 3 of a three page comic.

Page 1 [link]
Page 2 [link]


I have my own thoughts on this story, but I invite every reader to take away their own meaning.

-- My apologies for my inability to depict humans very well, especially children.
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~laihiriel:iconlaihiriel: Jul 21, 2008, 9:09:37 PM
I am quite intrigued by the story, and I want to hear more! And you did a good job with the little girl. She looks realistic, and I get the "tan and super blonde from being outside all the time" look you've got going on.
~Katimazie:iconKatimazie: Jul 22, 2008, 2:15:08 PM
I have to say, I think this is he best page of the three. the last panel really jumps straight out at you.

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Books. Cats.
Life is Good.
~AGLArmsFactory:iconAGLArmsFactory: Jul 22, 2008, 4:34:15 PM
You've painted the girl really well, its a nice little story. I like all the panels actually, particulary the lure too. Although the text seemed a little hard to follow and maybe you coulda done more with that, but it is good :)

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Spike tummy charged, dual hopper overhead beard.
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*Shadsie:iconShadsie: Jul 22, 2008, 6:21:12 PM
I explained to Laihiriel on AIM that some of the weirdness with the text was on purpose - odd placement to compliment the surreal atmosphere. I'm still rethinking it, though.

I'm very happy with the way the lure came out. I used an actual fishing lure as a model (though it wasn't that color). My actual fishing stringer is that color green, though.

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Scavengers:
They that hunt what is already dead
and take that which has already been taken.

[link] - Bone Art and High Fantasy.
~TeaRoses:iconTeaRoses: Aug 17, 2008, 12:07:21 PM
I like the story, and I can think of lots of ways to interpret it. And the fish are cool.

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Last time you called me late at night you were naked and chained to your shower curtain rod. I hope this isn't going to be disappointing.
~walterlove -- for Walter of Hellsing
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